Tuesday 12 November 2013

    ENTANGLED BRANCHES
     
entangled branches
sun ascends through lifeless limbs
beautiful chaos                                        (Anmol )

phoenix up with fiery wings
from black ashes of the night                   ( Sumana Roy )

Posted for Tan Renga Challenge month @ Carpe Diem
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10 comments:

  1. kalpana solsi12 November 2013 at 04:45

    what a powerful couplet, phoenix rising from the ashes of the dark. loved it. Sumana.

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  2. Anonymous12 November 2013 at 05:32

    Phoenix and the ashes... very well crafted. :-)
    -HA

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  3. Gracy Dsouza12 November 2013 at 07:20

    What an awesome ending! I love it!

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  4. moondustwriter12 November 2013 at 13:57

    Fiery - perfect colorful ending

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  5. Anonymous12 November 2013 at 16:39

    ooooh, nice!!

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  6. Unknown12 November 2013 at 18:27

    Sweet! Love it! ♥

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  7. Chèvrefeuille13 November 2013 at 10:19

    Wonderfully composed completion Sumana ... thank you for sharing.

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  8. brudberg13 November 2013 at 13:11

    Love the completion

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  9. Anonymous13 November 2013 at 21:08

    wow, a very different approach - thank you!

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  10. Atreyee13 November 2013 at 23:09

    This mythical bird is a hot favourite of mine-so I immediately fell in love with your completion Sumana:-)

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Thank you. I am inspired.

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