Friday 1 November 2013


by the garden path
an upside down flowerpot
cottage for a toad                                     (Mark M. Redfearn)
a creepy being waits long
for a sumptuous dinner                            (Sumana Roy)      

Written for Carpe Diem's Tan Renga challenge month
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8 comments:

  1. Chèvrefeuille1 November 2013 at 21:44

    I like this second stanza Sumana, very well done, sounds a bit creepy, but that's ok,.

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  2. Atreyee2 November 2013 at 01:14

    Oooh,I detest snakes but detest toads too!Loved where you took the Tan Renga-very realistic Sumana:-)

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  3. Anonymous2 November 2013 at 02:19

    This is creepy, but I love it!

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  4. Unknown2 November 2013 at 06:21

    Very well done

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  5. Gillena Cox2 November 2013 at 06:25

    I'm trying BLOG HOP at Lunch Break, please stop by and share a link.
    A happy Saturday to you


    much love...

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  6. carol l mckenna2 November 2013 at 08:30

    neat ~ I really like how you finished Mark's ~ thanks, carol, xx

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  7. joanne2 November 2013 at 10:41

    creepier than a warty toad?

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  8. Anonymous2 November 2013 at 19:09

    oh-oh. ☺ i love your completion. a bit of mystery added in...

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Thank you. I am inspired.

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